What Went Wrong - #8

Aloha...
Today let say hello to you in Hawaii language. Do you know that Aloha means affection, peace, compassion, and mercy? This word also has come to be used as an English greeting to say goodbye and hello.

Here come the answer for the previous exercise of WWW (What Went Wrong)? And then follow by the next WWW exercise. Let see what errors do we have to correct in the 7th exercise.

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1. Since 1960, my family will have moved to Bangkok
2. It had rained was raining when she went out.
3. I has have studied singing for 6 months.
4. Last time that I see saw him, he looks looked quite happy.
5. Those who are doing have done their examination already can go out.

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Here are the explanation on those correction:

1. Since 1960, my family will to Bangkok  X
   Correction: Since 1960, my family have moved to Bangkok.
   Explanation: "Since" is the keyword that is found in perfect tense. Will is not correct in this sentence. Also, the main verb is missing here, we can also put have been instead of have moved
   Reference: Chapter 5 Present Perfect Tense
2. It had rained when she went out.  X
   Correction: It was raining when she went out.
   Explanation:  In this question, there are 2 events. The first action was happening and the the second one interrupted.
   Reference: Chapter 4 Past Continuous Tense
3. I has studied singing for 6 months.  X
   Correction: I have studied singing for 6 months. 
   Explanation: Like the first question, "for" is the keyword that is found in perfect tense. But the problem here is different, what went wrong here is verb to have "has". I does not agree with has, it has to go with have.
   Reference: Chapter 5 Present Perfect Tense
4. Last time that I see him, he looks quite happy. X
   Correction: Last time that I saw him, he looked quite happy.
   Explanation:  The keyword here is "last time" and we use it with past tense. The problem in this question is verb to see and to look, they need t be changed to past tense from saw and looked.
   Reference: Chapter 2 Past Simple Tense
5. Those who are doing their examination already can go out. X
   Correction: Those who have done their examination already can go out.
   Explanation: Already is the keyword here, and it can also be found in perfect tense structure.  Also, "are doing" does not fit here in this sentence. How could you be doing something and then go out? it does not quite make sense.
   Reference: Chapter 5 Present Perfect Tense

As usual, after the answer to the previous exercise of WWW we also will bring you the next lesson. And below is the next lesson of WWW (What Went Wrong), lesson number 8.

Can you identify the errors in this exercise?. Correction will be given in the next exercise as usual.

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1. What were you done at 7 o’clock last night ?
2. A lot of wild animals were slaughtered by hunters ever year..
3. The girls were playing tennis when it has begun to rain.
4. Next year you had to be more economical than this year.
5. At five tomorrow she will sing at the Crown hotel.

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Until next time, Aloha!!